Hello dunkey
luv u
but the office itza bad show
jk lol, nice
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Hello dunkey
luv u
but the office itza bad show
jk lol, nice
mugger? only in America. ha ha ha
do you mean the term "mugger"?
(im not american btw and english is not my first language so thats why im asking)
Voice acting is weird, can't differentiate between multiple voices, lighting is wierd and plot points are kinda weak. Animation is slightly choppy.
Two guys try to decide over pizza or tacos but end with yelling at each other:
This is the basic "I want this but I disagree plot point" is a cliche plotpoint
Dude waits too long deciding something:
I dont get it
Both plots sound like you just thought of it on the spot and are not at all funny
Sleep on your plots, your story and characters, think hard, plots dont just come out of nowhere, they are usually based on relatable experiences, you dont just sit down and make a script out of nowhere, while your doing stuff, you take notes and create story's out of those plots later on.
TL:DR:
Weak sauce
Im a gay asian guy in vancouver.
This game really connected with me somehow.
Thank you nutcase :)
This was experimental all right but I'm dancing in the seat at the melodic harmony of the voice moving with the beat, I love it. The lyrics seem to be a little bit non-sensical but I'm really liking it.
The ending and start of the song are a bit annoying though as the immediate strong drum machine hurts the ears without a good introduction. Overall, 4/5
That's a good note, I might fade in the volume a bit at the beginning so it isn't so immediate. Thanks for the review!
Tastes like 90's cartoons
IM GONNA USE THIS IN AN ANIMATION X3 ILL GIV U CREDITS
Go for it. :D
Absolutely Stunning. The Clothes fold at the right angles and the shading is on point, good job. You do better than me.
Thanks
This style is-
different.
and the shading is ok
recomended for scouting
The colors arnt executed in a very creative way
couldve used a lighter green
a darker brown.
Thank you very much for feedback and recommendation!
I will definitely try to experiment more with colors, to be honest that's one of few backgrounds i ever draw, maybe that's why i choose more of a soft option then creative, but i will work on that ^^
I like it, shading could use some work though, and the shadow is just a circle, which is a bummer
thanks for the advice! I'l try to do beter next time.
I am a beginner animationator who makes animations I also have an old account called Tommytherox, but we don't talk about it. Wanna collab, just send me a message. I eat Tacos.
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