Voice could use some work
like a lot of work
consider a voice changer?
The voice is a part of the writing, writing without proper voicework could elicit different emotions than what is intended, also, voice cracks, which sent a skittering of cringe through my body.
The animation itself is... ok, I mean, your giving tweens way too much credit, it cant do everything, though you do have a good grip on how to use them, I don't recommend you use them consistently, a good mix between frame by frame and tweening creates something phenomenal in a fraction of the time.
mugger? only in America. ha ha ha
do you mean the term "mugger"?
(im not american btw and english is not my first language so thats why im asking)
better than knack 10000000 outta 546
laughed my azz off
IM GONNA USE THIS IN AN ANIMATION X3 ILL GIV U CREDITS
Go for it. :D
SONG IS AWESOME
Cant wait 2 tell all my frends about it:D
Absolutely Stunning. The Clothes fold at the right angles and the shading is on point, good job. You do better than me.
This style is-
and the shading is ok
recomended for scouting
The colors arnt executed in a very creative way
couldve used a lighter green
a darker brown.
Thank you very much for feedback and recommendation!
I will definitely try to experiment more with colors, to be honest that's one of few backgrounds i ever draw, maybe that's why i choose more of a soft option then creative, but i will work on that ^^
I like it, shading could use some work though, and the shadow is just a circle, which is a bummer
thanks for the advice! I'l try to do beter next time.
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