Voice could use some work
like a lot of work
consider a voice changer?
The voice is a part of the writing, writing without proper voicework could elicit different emotions than what is intended, also, voice cracks, which sent a skittering of cringe through my body.
The animation itself is... ok, I mean, your giving tweens way too much credit, it cant do everything, though you do have a good grip on how to use them, I don't recommend you use them consistently, a good mix between frame by frame and tweening creates something phenomenal in a fraction of the time.
mugger? only in America. ha ha ha
do you mean the term "mugger"?
(im not american btw and english is not my first language so thats why im asking)
better than knack 10000000 outta 546
laughed my azz off
Voice acting is weird, can't differentiate between multiple voices, lighting is wierd and plot points are kinda weak. Animation is slightly choppy.
Two guys try to decide over pizza or tacos but end with yelling at each other:
This is the basic "I want this but I disagree plot point" is a cliche plotpoint
Dude waits too long deciding something:
I dont get it
Both plots sound like you just thought of it on the spot and are not at all funny
Sleep on your plots, your story and characters, think hard, plots dont just come out of nowhere, they are usually based on relatable experiences, you dont just sit down and make a script out of nowhere, while your doing stuff, you take notes and create story's out of those plots later on.
holy shit this is really good
the rigs look so flexible dude!
i luv it
please finish it maybe?
this is straight up lazy
where is the motion?
- You drew something
- its cool
- no color
- no inbetweens
- any actual motion is choppy and out of place
- the hands clipped through his face at one point
thats actually really lazy
if you do something can you atleast finish it before showing it to anyone?
That's just acting like a jerk. I would take your crituques if they were nice, not just saying that it's lazy. That's not helping me one bit. And also going to my first freaking post and telling me your opinions doesn't help either.
voice could use some work
also, premise, style, story and characters are hillarious and original
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