Voice acting is weird, can't differentiate between multiple voices, lighting is wierd and plot points are kinda weak. Animation is slightly choppy.
Two guys try to decide over pizza or tacos but end with yelling at each other:
This is the basic "I want this but I disagree plot point" is a cliche plotpoint
Dude waits too long deciding something:
I dont get it
Both plots sound like you just thought of it on the spot and are not at all funny
Sleep on your plots, your story and characters, think hard, plots dont just come out of nowhere, they are usually based on relatable experiences, you dont just sit down and make a script out of nowhere, while your doing stuff, you take notes and create story's out of those plots later on.
holy shit this is really good
the rigs look so flexible dude!
IM GONNA USE THIS IN AN ANIMATION X3 ILL GIV U CREDITS
Go for it. :D
SONG IS AWESOME
Cant wait 2 tell all my frends about it:D
Absolutely Stunning. The Clothes fold at the right angles and the shading is on point, good job. You do better than me.
This style is-
and the shading is ok
recomended for scouting
The colors arnt executed in a very creative way
couldve used a lighter green
a darker brown.
Thank you very much for feedback and recommendation!
I will definitely try to experiment more with colors, to be honest that's one of few backgrounds i ever draw, maybe that's why i choose more of a soft option then creative, but i will work on that ^^
I like it, shading could use some work though, and the shadow is just a circle, which is a bummer
thanks for the advice! I'l try to do beter next time.
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