SrTomDub's Reviews

[My Dentist Quentis]

Hello dunkey

luv u

but the office itza bad show

jk lol, nice

[My Attempt At Being A Hero]

mugger? only in America. ha ha ha

olbengc responds:

do you mean the term "mugger"?

(im not american btw and english is not my first language so thats why im asking)

[UTP Season 1]

Voice acting is weird, can't differentiate between multiple voices, lighting is wierd and plot points are kinda weak. Animation is slightly choppy.

Two guys try to decide over pizza or tacos but end with yelling at each other:
This is the basic "I want this but I disagree plot point" is a cliche plotpoint

Dude waits too long deciding something:
I dont get it

Both plots sound like you just thought of it on the spot and are not at all funny
Sleep on your plots, your story and characters, think hard, plots dont just come out of nowhere, they are usually based on relatable experiences, you dont just sit down and make a script out of nowhere, while your doing stuff, you take notes and create story's out of those plots later on.

TL:DR:
Weak sauce

[Coming Out Simulator]

Im a gay asian guy in vancouver.
This game really connected with me somehow.
Thank you nutcase :)

[The One Who Goes]

This was experimental all right but I'm dancing in the seat at the melodic harmony of the voice moving with the beat, I love it. The lyrics seem to be a little bit non-sensical but I'm really liking it.
The ending and start of the song are a bit annoying though as the immediate strong drum machine hurts the ears without a good introduction. Overall, 4/5

Michael-Flaherty responds:

That's a good note, I might fade in the volume a bit at the beginning so it isn't so immediate. Thanks for the review!

[For My Grandmother [ Maria Nishima Cloudman] [RIP]]

Tastes like 90's cartoons

[Rayzor - Superpowers]

IM GONNA USE THIS IN AN ANIMATION X3 ILL GIV U CREDITS

N-Dumasis responds:

Go for it. :D

[Larrynachos Profile Picture]

Absolutely Stunning. The Clothes fold at the right angles and the shading is on point, good job. You do better than me.

StaticSkull responds:

Thanks

[Carl The Killer]

This style is-
different.
and the shading is ok
recomended for scouting
The colors arnt executed in a very creative way
couldve used a lighter green
a darker brown.

DerpInHoves responds:

Thank you very much for feedback and recommendation!
I will definitely try to experiment more with colors, to be honest that's one of few backgrounds i ever draw, maybe that's why i choose more of a soft option then creative, but i will work on that ^^

[Rondelle drawing]

I like it, shading could use some work though, and the shadow is just a circle, which is a bummer

joehanisburg responds:

thanks for the advice! I'l try to do beter next time.