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I like the visuals (the're amazing) but the voice could do some work...
The script is milquetoast at best.w

storytellerYT responds:

Thanks for the suggestion

Imma try dis XD
Great story telling, really cracked me up

Are you secretly spooderman?

Lol, i liked the reactions from spiderman and batman, was cool, nice one moha.
also liked the jokes lol.

Short: I think it was ok, not all that funny, just... ok.

Long: I liked how you did the sounds, thats a plus. Though your use of tweens shoulld be carefully monitered, its not the problem solver for everything, for example, the walking animation in the start, it kinda looks like hes floating toward the house, this makes your animation look crude, and lazy. There is something called a Movie Clip and/or Graphics, those present a more professional clean tween if your using advanced movements (like walking) movements such as cody blowing his trumpet, thats ok, but walking is a much more hard to do movement if you put the camera above the waist. I like how you tried to replicate the film tearing of old film reels, it was kinda funny. The weapons mewx and john were holding (I really want to call them guns but they honestly dont look like that) Were just a box with silver in it, detail would be cool. The story was great, i would kill fora baconator too. All in together, its not that bad, certainly better than what i can do. 2.5/5 good job m8.

I am a beginner animationator who makes animations I also have an old account called Tommytherox, but we don't talk about it. Wanna collab, just send me a message. I eat Tacos.

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