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Hello dunkey

luv u

but the office itza bad show

jk lol, nice

mugger? only in America. ha ha ha

olbengc responds:

do you mean the term "mugger"?

(im not american btw and english is not my first language so thats why im asking)

Voice acting is weird, can't differentiate between multiple voices, lighting is wierd and plot points are kinda weak. Animation is slightly choppy.

Two guys try to decide over pizza or tacos but end with yelling at each other:
This is the basic "I want this but I disagree plot point" is a cliche plotpoint

Dude waits too long deciding something:
I dont get it

Both plots sound like you just thought of it on the spot and are not at all funny
Sleep on your plots, your story and characters, think hard, plots dont just come out of nowhere, they are usually based on relatable experiences, you dont just sit down and make a script out of nowhere, while your doing stuff, you take notes and create story's out of those plots later on.

TL:DR:
Weak sauce

10/10

holy shit this is really good
the rigs look so flexible dude!

i luv it

please finish it maybe?
this is straight up lazy
add color
where is the motion?

guds
- You drew something
- its cool

badz
- no color
- no inbetweens
- any actual motion is choppy and out of place
- the hands clipped through his face at one point
thats actually really lazy
if you do something can you atleast finish it before showing it to anyone?

UTPComix responds:

That's just acting like a jerk. I would take your crituques if they were nice, not just saying that it's lazy. That's not helping me one bit. And also going to my first freaking post and telling me your opinions doesn't help either.

voice could use some work

also, premise, style, story and characters are hillarious and original
F U N N Y A N D O R I G I N A L
ABSOLUTELY ORIGINAL
NOT COPIED AT ALL
GUD JUB

2/5

Needs more backgrounds
Unblinking eyes
colors are boring

I am a beginner animationator who makes animations I also have an old account called Tommytherox, but we don't talk about it. Wanna collab, just send me a message. I eat Tacos.

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